Improving my English #4 homework :(

In a far land, like everyday a poor sailor was working in her his older boat. He loves fishing in his boat when the day is

sunny but hates working when the day is rainy. One day the sailor planned something, his first adventure. He

wanted travel across the sea in his older boat and he had in mind traveling for one weak week. On Monday the sailor looked at

his map and he decided on a long travel trip but in calm waters. The next day he started alone on his travel trip across the ocean. The

first day was wonderful but at night it was terrible. A big storm caught the sailor and he lost all his food and water. He

thought, “I hope somebody will remember me at this time”. Five days spent passed when he wrote a letter in on a piece of

paper, the words said “help me, my loneliness is killing me, the sun is threatening me and it is like the hell”