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I adore music
I basked in the lights of music like a tomcat (spring cat). I got a such pleasure from concert of classical music. Austrian't orcestra was incomparable. But one thing a bit upset me, I had forgotten my glasses thats why I saw blurry spots instead of musicians. I could see only some cellos in the first row. In the words my friend in the second row was a very beautiful cellist but for me just spot. )) I had so charge so after concert I was in euphoria the whole next day.
I basked in the lights of music like a tomcat. I got such pleasure from (better: watching) that classical music concert. The Austrian orchestra was incomparable. But (better: Nevertheless,) one thing upset me a bit: I had forgotten my glasses so I therefore saw blurry spots instead of musicians and cellos. I could see the cellos in the first row (in oral English, we might phrase this sentence the original way, but not in written English). My friend in the second row was able to see a beautiful cellist who for me was just a spot. I had gotten so charged up that after the concert I was in euphoria the whole next day.
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