Introduce my school
I am a student of Hope Middle School, I am very glad to you arrived our school to visit, Let me take you to look around our school campus.
There are football field and basketball court in the middle of school, we always have football game every year, and sometimes have other game on the playground. Those are teaching building that our classroom on the second floor.
In the classroom have thirty students and have five teachers, our head teacher is Miss LI , she has teach us math and she always very amicable, so we are very love she.
At school, we are learn a lot of subjects, there are Mathmatic, English and else. We are hard study all of them.
I hope you will have nice experience during our school.
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IntroduceTION OF my school
I am a student of Hope Middle School, I am very glad to THAT you arrived our school to visit, Let me take SHOW you to look around our THE school'S campus.
There are football field and basketball court in the middle of school, we always have football gameS COMPETITION every year, and sometimes have other gameS on the playground. Those are ACADEMIC teaching building that our classroom on the second floor.
In the classroom have HAS thirty students and have five teachers, our THE head teacher is Miss LI , she has teach TEACHES us math, and she IS always very amicable, so we are very love she HER TOO MUCH (A LOT).
At school, we are learn a lot of subjects, there WHICH are Mathmatic, English and else OTHERS. We are hard study all of them HARD.
I hope HOPEFULLY you will have nice experience during VISITING our school.
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有一句比较明显的错误 "so we are very love s以为he" 应为 "we very love her"
还有，school和campus混在一起似乎有点不妥
campus 意为 the buildings of a college or university and the land that surrounds them:
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/campus?q=campus
而你读的是中学，所以不是很妥当
还有In the classroom have thirty students and have five teachers
应用There be结构代表存在，或者加上适当的主语也行。
we are learn a lot of subjects和we are hard study all of them
be +V-ing形式或不定式, 准确来说，应该是learning
还有最后一句，忘记加冠词了，除非你表示的是”经验“解
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Introduce my school
I am a student of Hope Middle School, I am very glad that you arrived at our school to visit, Let me show you our school campus.
There are football field and basketball court in the middle of school, we always have football games every year, and sometimes have other games on the playground. Those are teaching buildings our classroom is on the second floor.
The classroom have thirty students and five teachers, our head teacher is Miss LI , she teaches us math and she always very amicable, so we very love she.
At school, we are learning a lot of subjects, there are Mathmatic, English and else. We are study all of them hard.
I hope you will have nice experience our school.
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