yesterday
I
sleep.I am looking dream,and I know-today is Sunday,I will wake up at 1
hour later.But...
Much snow-oh my God,it is called as spring?!-everywhere.I have to stend
up before 6,and come to cleaning asfault from snow,ice,and other awfull
things.
After this,I come to get breakfast.M-m,intresting,what is will
exactly?So,it is rice with meat.Meat-tasty,rice-not very.But not
important=)
In sunday we(soldiers) have more free time then usually,and I all day
talk with my parents and friends.And eat sweet pie))
About 8 pm I went to prepaire my military dress(for morning inspect at
next day). Evening rolle-call and....all!Day has finish=)Not the most
funny day,but all in all,I dont care,I going to sleep)
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Yesterday
I am sleeping. I am having a dream, and I know today is Sunday. I will wake up in one
hour. But...
Much snow! Oh, my God! They call this spring?! -everywhere. I have to get
up before six, and go to clean the snow, ice, and other awful things off of the asphalt.
After this, I come back in to get breakfast. M-m, intresting. What will it be,
exactly? So, it is rice with meat. Meat - tasty; rice - not very. But not
important. =)
On Sunday we (soldiers) have more free time than usual, and I
talk with my parents and friends all day. And eat sweet pie. ))
About 8 pm, I go to prepare my military dress (for the next day's morning inspection). Evening roll call and....done! The day has finished. =) Not the most fun day, but all in all, I dont care. I am going to sleep. )
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