subjectivity: peace.

Subject: Peace

I was looking at nightly sky some days ago, and I noticed that a phrase I heard had sense absolutely.

I was looking at the night sky some days ago and I noticed that a phrase I had heard made sense, absolutely.

The phrase was: stars can't shine without darkness.

The phrase was that stars can't shine with darkness.

Stars can't show its beautiful and intense brightness without a basis of immense and uniform darkness.

Stars can't show their beautiful and intense brightness without a background of immense and uniform darkness.

Immense darkness that accompany silently the show of a shining star.

Immense darkness that silently accompanies the display of a shining star.

The brightness of feelings, short or prolonged, can be more beautiful if there's more peace in place from where they come.

Perfect!

Nice imagery, thoughtful piece of writing.  Enjoyable to read.  What subject are you writing about next?

I will be the immensity of darkness and peace that perfects the show of your brightness, together we will create beauty.

I will be the immensity of darkness and peace that perfects the display of your brightness, together we will create beauty.

I will be the immensity of darkness and peace that backgrounds* your brilliance / brightness;  together we will create beauty.

*background doesn't normally work as a verb -- but it works here -- I dunno.  What do you think?  Can an immensity of darkness background brilliance -- I think so.

You will come to rest exhausted after giving away your brilliance to the world, will come to rest on me, where you will find a vastness of repose.

Ya, good...

And perhaps the day comes, and it's coming, in that I'll learn of your sweetness, and you'll understand my peace.

And perhaps the day will come, and when it does -- I'll learn of your sweetness, and you'll understand my peace.

This has a Kahlil Gibran ring to it...

Then will begin a new era, in which we'll have the beauty of the universe in each of us. And our labor to the other will be fulfilled.

Then will begin a new era, in which there'll be the beauty of the universe in each of us, and our duty to the other will have been fulfilled.