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Never Give up From now on I will write a diary in italki. Time past away so quickly. I have been coming in Suzhou province for almost a month. And I am still looking for a job. It is kind of difficult for me to find a company to hire me due to I do not have any experience in the foreign trade industry. But I am still working very hard to study informations and knowledge about this industry. and I believe I will be hired by a company, also I will be an excellent worker in it. I will continue preparing for it until that moment is coming to me! By the way I am so lucky to find this website, and I would like to make friends from all over the world. To exchange the things you want to exchange. Hope myself good luck, you guys and girls too!

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Never give up

From now on I will write a diary in italki.

Time has past away so quickly. I have been coming in Suzhou province for almost a month. And I am still looking for a job. It is kind of difficult for me to find a company to hire me due to since/as/because I do not have any experience in the foreign trade industry. But I am still working very hard to study informations and knowledge about this industry and I believe I will be hired by a company. I will be an excellent worker in it. I will continue preparing for it until that moment comes. is coming to me!

By the way, I am so lucky to find this website and I would like to make friends from all over the world  to exchange the things you want to exchange.

Hope myself good luck, you guys and girls too!

I wish that we all have good luck.

May good luck come to us all.

I hope we all have good luck.

 

 

 

pass away = die

Time past away so quickly. - This has no verb. It is really a sentence fragment, by it depends what you wanted here.

Starting sentences with "and" or "But" is often a bad idea. Join the sentences together or just start a new sentence.

for almost a month and I am still looking

in the foreign trade industry, but I am still

"information" is generally collective, plural, so you do not needs "informations"

"study knowledge" seems to make sense but is not natural to me.

I think I would just say that I study this industry.

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