introduce oneself to
How everyone
my name is shenwenlai I'm a student I'm Not very high I'm 18 years old this year I love sports I also like to make friend I learn english not along time I also worked hard in learn
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introduce oneself to
How everyone
my name is shenwenlai I'm a student I'm Not very high I'm 18 years old this year I love sports I also like to make friend I learn english not along time I also worked hard in learn
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I think the title should be: (My Introduction)
How's everyone?
My name is Shenwelai, I'm a student. I'm not very tall, I'm 18 years old this year. I love sports and I also like to make friends. I learn English not a long time ago and also working hard to learn.
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hi shenwenlai :) well, in my opinion, you have used too many i or i'm :) but rest are good....keep on practicing :)
hi shenwenlai
my name is Lizi from indonesia. i'm 31 years old this year and not very tall also. i love music, sport(esspecially hatta yoga), and learn about cultures. nice to meet you here :)
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