My english diary
Yesterday , i met my close friend, he had lived in japan for a years and he came to korea . As soon as i met him and i laughed because he changed his hair style for he lived in japan . I had big smiled hahahahaha.
We went to beer house , the owner of beer house is my friend , so we went to there , for we stayed in there , we drank a lot of beer and we had fun together .
Around three o'clock Am , we went out there then we played a game in computer game rooms .
Finally i came back home at six o'clock AM . Really Really exhausted
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My English diary
Yesterday I met (up with) my close friend, he had lived been living in Japan for a some years and he came had just returned to Korea. As soon as I met him (again) and I laughed because he had changed his hair style for (the sake of) he lived living in Japan. I had a big smiled hahahahaha. (I gave a big smile (w/ noun) / I realled smiled (w/ verb))
We went to a beer house, the owner of beer house is my friend, so we went to there, for a while we stayed in there, we drank a lot of beer and we had fun together.
At around three o'clock Am (said as, "3 o'clock in the morning" OR "3 am"), we went out left there the beer house then we played a game in the computer game rooms. (played games in the computer rooms / played a game in the computer room.)
Finally I came back returned home at six o'clock AM, really really exhausted
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