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Cloud Atlas is the best film of 2012 Hello everbody! Today I want to tell about my impressions from the Cloud Atlas movie. I've already watched the film on December in 2012 and I did it last weekend again. To my mind this is the best film of 2012 year and the one of the ten best films what I have ever seen. My list of best films includes such flicks like Matrix, V for Vendetta, The Fountain, The Shawshank Redemption, The Pianist, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Inception, Forrest Gump, Brest Fortress. Coming back to the Cloud Atlas I want to say what I was astonished and wondered by it. I can't tell nothing about Tom Hanks took part in the film. For me it's a label of quality because I don't remember no one bad movie with him. The movie toched me for the deepest sides of my soul. The one lifted up on surface the most important problems of humanity such as blind human greed, world globalization, interracial intolerance and more. Unfortunately Cloud Atlas didn't take any Oscar award but it still lives in people hearts.

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Cloud Atlas is the best film of 2012

Hello everybody! Today I want to tell about my impressions from the Cloud Atlas movie. I've already watched the film on December in 2012 and I did it again last weekend again. 
To my mind this is the best film of 2012 year and the one of the ten best films what I have ever seen. My list of best films includes such flicks like Matrix, V for Vendetta, The Fountain, The Shawshank Redemption, The Pianist, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Inception, Forrest Gump, Brest Fortress.
Coming back to the Cloud Atlas I want to say what that I was astonished and wondered by it. I can't tell nothing anything about Tom Hanks who took part in the film (He starred in the movie - it's better). For me it's a label of quality because I don't remember no one any bad movie with him. The movie toched me for the deepest sides of my soul. The one lifted up on surface the most important problems of humanity such as blind human greed, world globalization, interracial intolerance and more. 
Unfortunately Cloud Atlas didn't take any Oscar award but it still lives in people hearts.

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Cloud Atlas is the best film of 2012

Hello everybody! Today I want to tell about my impressions from the Cloud Atlas movie.

 

I've had already watched the film in December of 2012 and I did it again last weekend. (You should have used PAST PERFECT instead of PRESENT PERFECT because the first clause has no connection with the present. It had been earlier than the second part of the sentence - last weekend.)


To my mind this is the best film of 2012 year (OR year 2012) and the one of the ten best films what I have ever seen. (Here you can omit THAT but you MUSTN'T USE WHAT after a noun.)

Further examples:

things I like most = things that I like most (WHAT is not correct here because the word "things" is a noun.)

This is the most beautiful city (that) I have ever seen.

 

My list of best films includes such flicks like Matrix, V for Vendetta, The Fountain, The Shawshank Redemption, The Pianist, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Inception, Forrest Gump, Brest Fortress. (These are cool movies.)


Coming back to the Cloud Atlas I want to say what that I was astonished and wondered by it. (THAT is only a conjuction here. You should check the grammar RELATIVE CLAUSES.)

  

I can't tell anything (You mustn't negate the sentence twice. Can't is a negation and nothing is also a negation because nothing = NO thing.) about Tom Hanks took part starring (OR who took part - RELATIVE CLAUSE again.) in the film.

 

For me it's a label of quality because I don't remember no one any (Double negation is incorrect.) bad movie with him. The movie touched me for the deepest sides of my soul. The ones lifted up on surface are the most important problems of humanity such as blind human greed, world globalization, interracial intolerance and more.
Unfortunately Cloud Atlas didn't take any Oscar award but it still lives in people's hearts.

 

Good job. I hope it will be helpful for you.

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