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I will never forget the day when I had my first puppy, because it was the most wonderfull puppy around the world, I called him Luks and today He is seven years old, is a german shepperd.
I felt very happy because was my first pet in my life, for that I played with Luks all the days and all the time.
was a wonderfull summer, I had holidays, a pet and I made a new good friend
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Improving my English
I will never forget the day when I had got my first puppy, because it he was the most wonderful puppy around in the world. I called named him Luks and today he is seven years old. He is a German Shepherd.
I felt very happy because he was my the first pet in my life I ever had, for that and so I played with him Luks all the days and all the time all the time, every day.
It was a wonderful summer: I had holidays, I was on vacation from school, I had a pet and I made a new good friend.
Great job Diego! Puppies are wonderful.
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Improving my English
I will never forget the day when I had my first puppy, because it was the most wonderful puppy around the world. I called him Luks and today it is seven years old. It's a German Shepherd.
I felt very happy because it was my first pet. I played with Luks all day long.
It was a wonderful summer; I was on vacation, I got a pet and I made a new good friend
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