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A small request #2 This is one more short essay written by my uncle. I would be really grateful if you could check it for mistakes. I live in a flat on the second floor of an apartment complex. It’s got three rooms, a kitchen and a bathroom. My room is in the far right corner of the flat. I use it as a study and a bedroom. There is a lot of technique and furniture in the room. On the right there is a fridge, a sofa, a wardrobe and a TV-set. On the floor is a carpet. In front of the TV-set are two armchairs and a coffee table. I like to sit there in the evenings with a cup of tea, watching a TV-show. On the left there are two beds, a mirror, a dresser, one more wardrobe and my work-table. The table has a lot of drawers where I keep my notes, books, pens and other things. On the table there is a computer, a printer and a lamp. Also there is a lot of posters on the wall. I really like my room and how it looks!

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It really is almost perfect.

 

A small request #2

This is one more short essay written by my uncle. I would be really grateful if you could check it for mistakes.

I live in a flat on the second floor of an apartment complex. It’s got has ("it's got" is very colloquial) three rooms, a kitchen and a bathroom.
My room is in the far right corner of the flat. I use it as a study and a bedroom. There is a lot of technique appliances and furniture in the room. On the right there is a fridge, a sofa, a wardrobe and a TV-set. On the floor there is a carpet. In front of the TV-set are two armchairs and a coffee table. I like to sit there in the evenings with a cup of tea, and watching a TV-show.
On the left there are two beds, a mirror, a dresser, one more wardrobe and my work-table. The table has a lot of drawers where in which I keep my notes, books, pens and other things. On the table there is a computer, a printer and a lamp. Also tThere is also a lot of posters on the wall.
I really like my room and how it looks!

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Looks fine to me! I've never seen someone write "On the floor is a carpet.", as I usually see "There is carpet on the floor.". Although, I don't think you're incorrect. :)

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