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Independence when you're young, so difficult to achieve. Independence. I am twenty-three years old and I'm feeling now more than ever the need to be independent, to have my own house (even a small apartment), a job, a relationship, all the stuff that is supposed to make me an adult, a grown up. However I'm still a University student, living with my parents and only doing some small online jobs. Don't get me wrong, mine is probably an "easy" life that many would like. But it doesn't satisfy me. Every single day I wake up thinking I'm still here and have to deal with my parents (and they have to deal with me!) and study and earn little money. Maybe this is why I do online jobs, because I strive to be independent. And also because my parents make me feel guilty for all the cats I have, since they have to pay for it all. Is this weird? Do you have your independence? (Please, let me know of any mistake!)

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Independence when you're young is so difficult to achieve.

Independence. I am twenty-three years old and I'm feeling now more than ever the need to be independent, to have my own house (even a small apartment), a job, a relationship, all the stuff that is supposed to make me an adult, a grownup.
However, I'm still a University student, living with my parents and only doing some small online jobs.

Don't get me wrong, mine is probably an "easy" life that many would like. But it doesn't satisfy me. Every single day I wake up thinking I'm still here and have to deal with my parents (and they have to deal with me!) and study and earn a little money.

Maybe this is why I do online jobs, because I strive to be independent. And Also because my parents make me feel guilty for all the cats I have, since they have to pay for it all. Is this weird?

Do you have your independence?

(Please, let me know of any mistake!)

 

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