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Love in spring. Tell me your story! Spring is the time of love. All flesh in the world revives and start to live another life. I mean not the live which continued in winter. Another life, another weather, another mind. Of course you understand what I mean. Sometimes winter is preparing us for changes. And I really enjoy that! See how people start smiling and snow start malt. And what can I add? It’s love, love, love. I want to hear your own stories about feelings! Certainly in spring! Please, write it in English. I with great pleasure read it.

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hi anna m y story with love start in spring and its end was in spring olso..spring must be insaid ourself ... to feel areal life and real love... am sorry to my spring...
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hi anna m y story with love start in spring and its end was in spring olso..spring must be insaid ourself ... to feel areal life and real love... am sorry to my spring...
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Well, I just want to be a mom in spring, The weather is so nice and trees and all living creatures are so colorful, Ahh, I really want to share this spring with a new born life!
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Love in spring. Tell me your story!

Spring is the time of love. All living things in the world revive and start to live another life. I mean not the life which they lived in the winter. Another life, other weather, another mind. Of course you understand what I mean.
Sometimes winter is preparing us for changes. And I really enjoy that! See how people start smiling and snow starts to melt. And what can I add? It’s love, love, love.
I want to hear your own stories about feelings! Certainly in the spring! Please, write it in English. I with great pleasure will read it.  More typical: I will read it with great pleasure!


I live in warm clime now, where it never really gets cold in winter.  But I can still remember how full of life spring often seems to those who have just endured a severe winter.

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