learning English!

I have been learning English for like three years, It all started when I went to London, because one of the my best friends lives in London. When I visited her for the first time, I was invited a Christmas party which was also the first time with English people for me. There are more than twenty people who were my friend's family in law, they all greeted me and treated like a their family members. I was given a lot of food those were so spacial for Christmas and I took a funny crown that maid of paper. Among the food, especially I liked the mince pie which was English traditional desert, it smelled aromatic and sweet. During the party I felt extremely excited but just one thing I came across a difficulty is, that I couldn't communicate between them. So I decided learning English immediately, since then I have fallen in love with English gradually...

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I have been learning English for like three years. My Best friend lives in London and It all started when I went to her. It is the first time that I visited her. I was invited in a Christmas party and It's also my first time to meet with the English people. There were more than twenty persons who were my friend's family in-laws, they all greeted and treated me like their family member.
They gave me foods that were just prepared only for Christmas. I took a funny crown that made of paper. Among the foods, I like the mince pie the most, which is the English traditional desert, it smells aromatic and sweet. During the party, I felt extremely excited but there is a thing that is very difficult to do- I cannot communicate with them.So I decided to learn English immediately since I have fallen in love with the English language gradually.



~ This is not a bad English text. I love how you used your imagination and experience to write a very good entry. Just don't forget to use punctuation marks because its very important. 

learning English!
I have been learning English for like three years. It all started when I went to London, because one of the my best friends lives in London. When I visited her for the first time, I was invited to a Christmas party which was the first time I have been with English people. There were more than twenty people who were my friend's family in law, they all greeted me and treated like their family members. I was given a lot of food that was specifically for Christmas and I took a funny crown that was made of paper. Among the foods, I liked the mince pie which was English traditional dessert, it smelled aromatic and sweet. During the party I felt extremely excited but just one thing I came across an obsatacle, I couldn't communicate with them. So I decided learning English immediately, since then I have gradually fallen in love with English.

learning English!

I have been learning English for like three years. It all started when I went to London, because one of the my best friends lives in London. When I visited her for the first time, I was invited a Christmas party which was athe first time I have been with English people. There were more than twenty people who were my friend's family in law, they all greeted me and treated like their family members. I was given a lot of food that was specifically for Christmas and I took a funny crown that was made of paper. Among the foods, I liked the mince pie which was English traditional dessert, it smelled aromatic and sweet. During the party I felt extremely excited but just one thing I came across an obsatacle, I couldn't communicate with them. So I decided learning English immediately, since then I have gradually fallen in love with English.