musical event ..

i have attended a lot of musical events.but recently i have attended a musical event of diljit.

I have attended a lot of concerts, and I recently attended a concert by Diljit. (DIFFERENT, BUT ALSO OK: I attend a lot of concerts, and I recently attended one by Diljit.)

he is a famous punjabi singer. 

He                 Punjabi

the event was held in khalsa college.the stage was very well decorated.there were lot of crowd .

The event was held at Khalsa College. The state was very well decorated.  There was a large crowd (ALSO: there were a lot of people.)

i went there with my friends.we were very exited to meet him.as the moment diljit entered the crowd start shouting.

I went there with my friends.  We were very excited to meet him.  At the moment Diljit entered, the crowd started shouting.

everyone have smile on there faces.he sang various songs.he also sang one of my favourite songs from the album back to basics.

Everyone had a smile on their face. (NOTE: "their" isn't really correct, but we use it anyway.) He sang various songs.  He also sang one of themy favorite songs from the album Back to Basics.

we enjoyed a lot there.at last, we took snaps with him and around 8'o clock we came back home.on the whole it was very memborable event.

We really enjoyed it there.  Finally, we took pictures with him, and around 8 o'clock we came back home.  On the whole, it was a very memorable event.