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Hong Kong SAR China flagKieran Chang
my story Many years ago,l am middle school student , l fell in love with a girl like a long time. this felling is not express. l was very crazy,but l was introverted.Everyday after school, l do not go home for a long time in lnternet cafes until early morning,because l am in the lnternet to communicate with her. But l was shy to talk to her in real life .later l began to study to exercise in order to l became with confidence. l never talked her. this l know to be brave and face of love.give up will be lose.

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my story

Many years ago, when l was a middle school student, l fell in love with a girl for a long time. I cannot express this feeling is cannot express. l was very crazy, but l was introverted. Everyday after school, l did not go home for a long time because I was in lnternet cafes until early morning, because l was on the lnternet to communicate with her. However, l was too shy to talk to her in real life. Later, l began to study exercise in order to get with confidence. l never talked to her. Now l know to be brave and face of love.  To give up will be to lose.

 

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