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I don't know Arabic but I find some grammatical mistakes:
your sons are not your own
your sons are the sons of the life that misses itsaelf
they come to the life throught you but not you
Although they live with you but they are not your owns.
nizar qbani-نزار قباني
Maybe i didnt translate it accurately but i try. This is my best poem because it told about the painful reality that the parents wants their sons to be(?) like they and to live life likes their life.
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Good poem: short but interesting. I have never heard about Nizar Qabbani but now I will know about this famous Syrian diplomat, poet and publisher :)
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