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Is there anyone can help me to correct this report, please?
The line gragh shows the difference in oil price per barrel in US dollars in the period of years 1995 to 2015.
As we can see, there is a relatively rising trend in the gragh except in about the period between 1995 to 2000, on during which it first rose from $20 to about $25 at from 1995 to 1998 and then droped back to about $17 at in 2000, in which it was the lowest point bottle of gragh in 2000. After then, the following by a it slightly increased to around $50 at in 2006. However, after the years of 2006, the oil prices had a their fastest speed rose up rise to $120 per barrel in 2010, which is $100 more much than the beginning year did. Furthermore, the oil prices had steadily increased and expected to be continuitely increase to $130 at 2015.
To sum up, the oil prices of the year of 2000 was in bottle, were the lowest, about barely $17 per barrel. After that the oil prices was dramaticly increased in the following years,
even though the trend expected to be continuite. <Sorry I do not understand your intention for thjis fragment>
"After that" & "in the following years" is a little redundant.
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Hope this helps.
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