Motivation for getting a degree « Master of Engineering » in The University of Calgary.Correct,Please

This letter should serve as a description of the reasons for making my final decision to depart for Canada, with the purpose of getting a M.Eng in Petroleum Engineering. 

In the course of my professional duties as a Technician of the Industrial Engineering Department at the manufacturing practices in the Okhotsk Sea, I watched the trends in production technology and gas companies in Russia and Norway in particular. This is reflected in the introduction of common computer software and hardware innovation in enterprises and use of automated forms of control of complex manufacturing operations performed on the offshore fields. 

These innovations are not accidental. In the West, particularly in Canada and the U.S., these technologies have existed for some time, constantly proving its their effectiveness, efficiency and rationality. Applying these technologies, domestic companies and enterprises are able to increase the volume, speed and quality of work. 

Today, many oil and gas companies of Russia employ qualified engineers from Canada and Norway as well as specialists from our country who do not have sufficient expertise in the field of IT information technologies [If IT means Information Technology, this could be a repetition?] that are used today in the oil and gas sector.  and Therefore, if I were to received the necessary education to through the UofC, I could easily find a job in Russia. Unfortunately, at the moment, Russian universities do not provide high-quality training programs for training and skills development in oil and gas specialized courses, in order to obtain such knowledge and skills necessary to implement the work of the enterprise enterprising information technology world. That's why I have taken a final decision to obtain this training at a Canadian University. Education in this school is a guarantee of high-quality training of to add to my profile, and rightly enjoys great recognition not only in Russia, but throughout world .When I graduate with a master’s degree in Petroleum Engineering at a foreign institute, and perfectly possession perfect my proficiency of the English language, it will open even more unique opportunities and challenges for improving my professional career and I'll be regarded as a high-quality specialist in oil and gas affairs, according to current and applicable international standards and requirements.

Actually, very well written with only a few minor errors. All the best in your endeavours!