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International tourism(version 2) Travelling abroad is of great interest for many people. However, the question is whether the disadvantages of global tourism will overshadow its benefits as the international tourism has already become a huge industry in the world. My view is that tourism will always exert a positive influence on this world. Tourism is playing an important role in the local economy by relieving pressure of the labor force and increasing foreign exchange reserves. This is because as the number of visitors inclines, local hotels, restaurants as well as other service industries will require more employees to cater for the growing demand of travelers. As a consequence, the development of tourism will generate more positions for the labor market. Local people are going to benefit from this. Moreover, tourists are bringing capital to their destinations. Either they exchange foreign currencies overseas or they carry their native currencies to sight spots, they will ultimately spend the money on their journey. Therefore, the foreign exchange will be benefited. Of course, this is not to say that the international tourism has no drawbacks. Excessive tourists will damage natural views gradually. There are many cases where remote natural sceneries are being destroyed because people are all eager to explorer untouched areas. Maybe hundreds years later, there would not be any a hundred percent natural places reserved. In summary, I reaffirm my position that international tourism is of great importance for the world. Meanwhile, local governments should enforce laws rigidly to guarantee that attractions will not be destroyed by tourists’ activities.

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International tourism(version 2)

Travelling abroad is of great interest for to many people. However, the question is whether the disadvantages of global tourism will overshadow its benefits as the international tourism has already become a huge industry in the world. My view is that tourism will always exert a positive influence on this world.

Tourism is playing an important role in the local economy by relieving pressure of the labor force and increasing foreign exchange reserves. This is because as the number of visitors inclines increases local hotels, restaurants as well as other service industries will require more employees to cater for the growing demands of travelers. As a consequence, the development of tourism will generate more positions for in the labor market. Local people are going to benefit from this. Moreover, tourists are bringing capital money to their destinations. Either they exchange foreign currencies overseas or they carry their native currencies to sight tourist spots, but they will ultimately spend the money on their journey. Therefore, the foreign exchange will be benefited.

Of course, this is not to say that the international tourism has no drawbacks. Excessive tourists will gradually damage natural views gradually. There are many cases where remote natural sceneries are being destroyed because people are all eager to explorer untouched areas. It's possible that in another hundred years there will not be any untouched areas leftMaybe hundreds years later, there would not be any a hundred percent natural places reserved.

In summary, I reaffirm my position that international tourism is of great importance for the world. Meanwhile, local governments should enforce laws rigidly to guarantee that attractions will not be destroyed by tourists’ activities.tourism

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