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snow!! Hello there! This morning I have woken up with the sound of a child how said in the street: snow!! Then, I run to the window to see the snow,because it isn't comun in Ciudad Real, where I live, but it was snowing only three minutes.So, I thought I couldn´t see the snow this year...But 3 hours ago it started to snow, and now all the streets are white! I have been looked the window all the time. I love the snow! The street is so beautiful!

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Snow!!

Hello there!
This morning I have woken woke up with to the sound of a child in the street how who said in the street: Snow!!
Then, I run ran to the window to see the snow, because it isn't comun common in Ciudad Real, where I live. But it was snowing for only three minutes. So, I thought I couldn´t see the snow this year, but 3 hours ago it started to snow again and now all the streets are white! I have been looked looking out of the window all the whole time. I love the snow! The street is so beautiful!

 

My humble corrections. Bien Carmen. I'd suggest to watch out for run-on sentences. Other than that, not bad. 

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snow!!

Hello there!
This morning I woke up with the sound of a child in the street who said: snow!!
Then, I ran to the window to see the snow, because it isn't common in Ciudad Real, where I live, but it was snowing for only three minutes. So, I thought I couldn´t see the snow this year...But 3 hours ago it started to snow, and now all the streets are white! I have been looking through the window all the time. I love the snow! The street is so beautiful!

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