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我国著名的朋友 伊斯顿埃利斯的布雷朋友 布雷是一个小说家 他写道:帝国卧室

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我国著名的朋友

布雷是伊斯顿埃利斯的朋友。
布雷是一个小说家。
他写过《帝国卧室》这部书。

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我国著名的朋友

伊斯顿埃利斯的朋友布雷,是一个小说家
他写下:《帝国卧室》

you must say who is friend in chinese  such as
伊斯顿埃利斯的朋友布雷
伊斯顿埃利斯的布雷朋友  your original in chinese means what is friend  
  
布雷will not a name ... it change into an adjective.

last ,帝国卧室 is a novel name right?
you should  to increase 《   》。

have a nice day!
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我国著名的朋友

伊斯顿埃利斯的朋友——布雷
布雷是一个小说家
他写过:《帝国卧室》




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