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check my letter! please! As for me, I always have a lot of friends. They are very kind, jolly, and well-bred. They can always help me and divide my problems. But I think you shouldn’t get depressed! You have to look very cheerful, kind and sociable. Moreover, you can always watch films; listen to your favorite music or, for example, to pick up a pet. You should think about other , not to get depressed. Well, I think you have to find new friends in your neighborhood. I can give you a piece of advice. To find new friends you can go for a walk to the park or some meeting. Also, the main advice, you can make a gorgeous party and invite all your neighbours, classmates and other people. And you obligatorily find a good friend. Be happy!

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Check my letter! Please!

As for me, I have always hadve a lot of friends. They are very kind, jolly, and well-bred. They can always help me and relieve me of divide my problems.
But I don't think you shouldn’t get depressed! You have to look very cheerful, kind and sociable. Moreover, you can always watch films; listen to your favorite music or, for example, to pick up a pet. You should think about others , so you do not to get depressed.
Well, I think you have to find new friends in your neighborhood. I can give you a word piece of advice. To find new friends you can go for a walk in to the park or go to some social event meeting. Also, the main advice, you can make a gorgeous party and invite all your neighbours, classmates and other people. And Then you obligatorily can find a good friend.
Be happy!

 

I made some interpretations (based on what I think you were trying to say).

- relieve me of my problems (i.e. make me feel like I don't have any problems)

- removed for example,  you already had examples before that statement, therefore inserting this in the middle just makes it out of place

- meeting (I think you meant party or better yet - the non-generic, non-event specific 'social event')

- Removed obligatory.  I don't understand how throwing a party obligates you to find a friend.

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