my job hi everybody. I'm new here, dont know exactly what to write, so lets talk about my job. I'm a sales rep. I started my job about thirteen years ago. I was excited to learn this job and I appro

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my job hi everybody. I'm new here, dont know exactly what to write, so lets talk about my job. I'm a sales rep. I started my job about thirteen years ago. I was excited to learn this job and I approched it doing all my best. Basically all I have to do is to sell, but there's somenthing more. Fortunatelly I dont sell to new company every time, I mostly have to go back to my acquired customers. So I get along with them trying also to have some fun on every appointment. Unfortunately last 2 years everything in business is tough, and it's still getting even worse. Here in Italy we had bad politicians last years and they didnt help people at all. Next we we have political elections so I hope we are gonna change lots of them. I really hope so! Thanks e arrivederci

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my job

hi everybody. I'm new here, dont know exactly what to write, so lets talk about my job.
I'm a sales rep. I started my job about thirteen years ago. I was excited to learn this job and I approched it doing all my best. Basically all I have to do is to sell, but there's somenthing more. Fortunatelly I dont sell to new company every time, I mostly have to go back to my acquired customers. So I get along with them trying also to have some fun on every appointment.
Unfortunately last 2 years everything in business is tough, and it's still getting even worse. Here in Italy we had bad politicians last years and they didnt help people at all. Next we we have political elections so I hope we are gonna change lots of them.
I really hope so! Thanks e arrivederci

This is good work. I enjoy to reading it.

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I'm lazy. My job [capitalization] Hi everybody. I'm new here and dont know exactly what to write, so let's talk about my job. [I hit the submit button by accident - sorry]

my job

hi everybody. I'm new here, dont know exactly what to write, so lets talk about my job.
I'm a sales rep. I started my job about thirteen years ago. I was excited to learn this job and I approched it doing all my best. Basically, all I have to do is to sell, but there's somenthing more. Fortunately, I dont sell to a new company every time - I mostly have to go back to my acquired customers, so I get along with them trying also to have some fun on every appointment.
Unfortunately, for the last 2 years ,everything in business is tough and it's still getting even worse. Here in Italy, we had bad politicians for the last few years and they didnt help people at all. Next, we we have political elections, so I hope we are gonna [going to] change lots of them.
I really hope so! Thanks e arrivederci

[Your English is excellent. Most of the errors were with commas and even native speakers have trouble with those. You have bad politicians? Unfortunately, not a rare thing]

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