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Weather I really like the winter here, It isn't cold but is fresh and I prefer cold than hot. I have never seen snow, although I live near to a mountain that has snow in january and sometimes febraury too. The weather here is so hot, I mean like 18°C here is cold and all people wear warm clothes when the temperature decreases like that and can increase to 35°C in summer and the air gets dry but doesn't look like a desert, there are many trees but almost all are dry. Since May until September is the rain season and all the environment gets green and the rivers get water and some people grown corn or other grains. But rain season is also dangerous here beacause there are many electric storms with thunders and lightnings, actually last year a man died because was working in the afternoon on his ranch and a lightning fell over him and he died immediately.

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I really like the winter here. It isn't cold, but is refreshing and I prefer cold weather to hot.
I have never seen snow, but I live near to a mountain that has snow in January and sometimes February too. The weather here is so hot, I mean, like 18°C here is cold and everyone wears warm clothes when the temperature decreases like that. It can heat up to 35°C in summer and the air gets dry but it doesn't look like a desert here. There are many trees but almost all of them are dry.
From May until September it is the rainy season and all the land gets green, the rivers get water, and some people grown corn or other grains.

But rain season is also dangerous here beacause there are many thunder storms with thundering and lightnings. Actually, last year a man died because he was working in the afternoon on his ranch and a lightning hit him. He died immediately.

Very good! One difference is that in English we tend not to say, "This and that and the other and so on." but, "This, that, the other, and so on." ;)

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I really like the winter here because it isn't cold but is fresh and I prefer the cold rather than the heat. than hot.
I have never seen snow, although I live near to a mountain that has snow on it in January and also sometimes in Febraury too. The weather here is so hot. I mean like We think that 18°C here is cold and that is when everyone all people wears warm clothes when the temperature decreases like that and In the summer the temperature can increase to 35°C in summer and the air gets becomes very dry but although it doesn't look like a desert. there are We have many trees but almost all of them look very are dry.
Since From May until September is the rainy season and that is when everything becomes all the environment gets green, and the rivers get fill with water and some people grown corn or other grains.

But However, rainy season is also dangerous here beacause as there are many electrical storms with much thunders and lightnings. actually Last year a man died because was working in the afternoon on his ranch and when a lightning bolt struck fell over him and he died immediately.

A good post!  Try not to begin any sentences with "and" or "but" as that is poor English. Keep up your good work!

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