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My valentine's day 24 years later. Finally I got a girl go on date on valentine’s day. We were primary school mates at the different classroom. I first saw her that she was 8 years old . I have a feeling that she is a cute and open girl . we even have not a conversation during time …….quite a long time pass . We were meeting on qq 3 weeks ago .(she always cute in my mind and more charming) god bless us . On valentine’s day when I said :” did you want to go on date with me “ She said ; “ yes I did , it is so crazy “ . my heart going to boiling, I did not believe my hear . I was talk it to my father as soon as possible ; P and then we were going to see a movie and have dinner . but we had not hand by hand in the street . this is a pity ! ; D Nowaday we chatting every day every time , i think that we have good feeling each other. We will go to my rent house to do food by ourselves at this Saturday . Who knows what happen to us .

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My Valentine's Day

24 years later I finally  got a girl go on date on Valentine’s Day. We were primary school mates in different classrooms. I first saw her when  she was 8 years old . I had a feeling that she was a cute and open girl . We didn't even have a conversation during this time …….

Quite a long time passed . We met on qq 3 weeks ago .(She was always cute in my mind and  now, she is even more charming) God blessed us on Valentine’s Day when I said, ” Do you want to go on date with me? “
She said, “ Yes I do , it is so crazy! “ .
My heart was pounding, I did not believe my ears . I  talked about it to my father as soon as possible afterwards.
Then we went to see a movie and had dinner, but we did not walk hand in hand in the street. That was  a pity!
Now we chat every day, all the time. I  think that we have good feelings towards each other. We will go to my rented house to cook food by ourselves this Saturday.  Who knows what will happen to us?


All the best! Good luck with this wonderful girl:)

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My valentine's day

24 years later. Finally I got a girl go on a date on valentine’s day. We were primary school mates but in different classrooms. I first saw her when she was 8 years old. I have a feeling that she is a cute and open girl. We didn't even have one conversation during since we were in school…….quite a long time. We met on qq 3 weeks ago. (she was always cute in my mind and more charming) god bless us. On valentine’s day when I asked her, "did you want to go on date with me", she said, "yes I did , it is so crazy". My heart started to boil, I did not believe my ears. I talked about it with my father as soon as possible.   ; P   We were going to see a movie and have dinner. But we didn't go hand by hand in the street . What a pity!

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Nowaday we chat every day all the time. I think that we have good feelings for each other. This saturday we are going to my rental house to prepare food. Who knows what will happen between us?

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HELLO, How are you today.my name is penda ,i saw your profile today and became intrested in you,i will also like to know you more,and i want you to send an email to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom i am. Here is my email address ([email protected]) I believe we can move from here! I am waiting for your mail to my email address above.. (Remeber the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life) yours in love, Penda.
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Watch out when making your own English idioms like "heart . . . boil" The closest that comes to my mind when reading this was "blood boil" which means angry. Try "set my heart aflutter" or Jura's "heart pounding".
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Props to you microdel! 非常好 :)

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