Hello Zeinab.  How are you?

 Your essay was  a fine articulation of your person  interests and experience.

Only a few minor corrections were necessary.

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Physics

My interest in deep thinking, precisely calculating and creatively solving problems dates back to my early childhood. Solving puzzles, basic math problems spurred on by my teacher’s persuasion used to be an utter delight for me. At an early age playing chess was one of my great hobbies and I was champion among my peers in primary high school competition.
By growing up and going to high school such inclinations to natural phenomena and solving puzzles tempted me to   continue my study in Physics and Mathematics in the theoretical branch.

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In addition to some new philosophical questions about nature and life I also had some study on philosophy as it puts all realities under trial.

 After high school I accepted [accepted at a college or university?] both in philosophy,    logic, and Physics.

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I have been enthralled by the  incredible feature of physics, which can explain the complex real world with simple theories and elegant formulas so I decided to study physics. At the university I was  faced with much material to be learned; but in the mean time with my own willpower and professor's encouragements, I enhanced my potentials and skills, and I appeared as a top and successful student, and at the first semester I was ranked First  student among the others who had been  admitted to the physics program by the director of the Exceptional Talents Office. What most fascinated me was the theories and discoveries of scientists exploring  the most fundamental questions about the mechanism of the Universe. It was  a most enjoyable thing that in High Energy Physics I can understand how our universe works at its most fundamental level by discovering the most elementary constituents of matter and energy, exploring the basic nature of space and time itself, and probing the interactions between them. It amazes me that powerful accelerators investigate the constituents and architecture of the universe using scientist's theories.

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  This is  a fascinating foray in an an autobiographical account.   I have seen a few quotes from  Paul  C W Davies,  but I have never actually read his books. He is  a notable authority in the field. Perhaps you know of his work.

  Here's something about him from Wikipedia:  Paul Charles William Davies, AM (born 22 April 1946) is an English physicist, writer and broadcaster, currently a professor at Arizona State University as well as the Director of BEYOND: Center for Fundamental Concepts in Science. He is also currently affiliated with the Institute for Quantum Studies at Chapman University in California. He has held previous academic appointments at the University of Cambridge, University of London, University of Newcastle upon Tyne, University of Adelaide and Macquarie University. His research interests are in the fields of cosmology, quantum field theory, and astrobiology.

   Please do write more, and be very encouraged. I am sure you can keep many people fascinated.  Space/Time is an exciting subject, and I can always learn more about it.  ---Warm Regards,  Bruce

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