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essay about cloning I would like to say that humans should not be allowed to be cloned because they can have in the future physical harms and psychological harms. From my point of view it is dangerous/ The world was stunned by the news in late February 1997 that a British embryologist named Ian Wilmut and his research team had successfully cloned a lamb named Dolly from an adult sheep. Dolly was created by replacing the DNA of one sheep's egg with the DNA of another sheep's udder. Many people are convinced that the cloning of any species, whether they are human or non-human, is ethically and morally wrong. Cloning of human beings would result in severe psychological effects. I guess that my country do cloning humans or animals, but it is secret. Many countries imposed a ban for human-cloning research. I does not think about cloning yourself but If I had a chance I would like to try do that. To be honest I want to clone famous person but I can not tell you because I'm embarrassed.

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Essay about cloning

I would like to say that humans should not be allowed to be cloned, because they can result in both physical and psychological harm in the future. From my point of view it is dangerous.


The world was stunned by the news in late February 1997 that a British embryologist named Ian Wilmut and his research team had successfully cloned a lamb named Dolly from an adult sheep. Dolly was created by replacing the DNA of one sheep's egg with the DNA of another sheep's udder.


Many people are convinced that the cloning of any species, whether they are human or non-human, is ethically and morally wrong. Cloning of human beings would result in severe psychological effects.


I guess that my country clones humans or animals, but it is a secret. Many countries imposed a ban on human-cloning research.

I do not think about cloning myself, but If I had a chance I would like to try do that. To be honest, I want to clone a famous person, but I cannot tell you who it is, because I'm embarrassed.

 

[Very good.  You grammar is generally good.  I changed some of the phrases to make them sound more natural to a native speaker.]

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