About housework

I usually do my housework on holidays.[space]I am away from my parents and I live in the domitory with my roommates.[space]When I am back home I do the housework.
I think it is a responsibility for children to do the housework.[space]As the member of family,[space]they should share the housework.[space]Besides,doing housework can develop the living ability of children.[space]So the children should help their parents with housework.

First I actually thought you meant homework, but you mean things like cleaning and the dishes right? Please note the spaces. It might seem as unimportant to you, but it makes the text clearer. Maybe it's because Chinese use signs and not letters that you forget, but interpunction is not unimportant in the 'latin-letter-languages'.