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an old thing Today i happened to find a PHS when i was packing the drawer.I don't know whether you(foreign friends)know that,it is something like mobile phone,I used it when i was in primary school,I was quite naughty at that time.the PHS is very old now.Look at the picture.

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An Old Thing

Today, I happened to find a PHS when I was packing the drawer. I don't know whether you (my foreign friends) know that it is something like a mobile phone. I used it when i was in primary school. I was quite naughty at that time. The PHS is very old now. Look at the picture.

 

How funny, Lu!  I bought a phone something like that in China a few years ago. It was a Nokia and worked well during many trips I made throughout China.  I do remember receiving some funny looks and giggles from a group of teenagers once while on a train ride from Shanghai to Suzhou.

Thanks for the essay.  It would be possible to combine the last several sentences so they are not so choppy but I did not want to make too many changes.

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