First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hey guys !
im a 16 girl from china .
i like to make friends .
if u r interested in chinese culture .
u can add me QQ：421496451 or send email 2 me [email protected]
im hoping that i can get letter from u !
[espcailly , im very interesting in europe and germany , i want to know more . ]
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hey guys !I'm a 16 year old girl from China .
I like to making friends .
If you're interested in Chinese culture, you can add me QQ：421496451 or send email to me [email protected]
I'm hoping that I can get a letter from you!
[I'm especially interested in Europe, particularly Germany. I want to know more about them. ]
Hi, welcome! :)
Some notes -
Age: I'm sixteen, I'm a sixteen year old. "I'm a 16" could mean a large dress size.
u r, 2 me: if you have the time and space to write full words, then write them fully ("you are, to me"). Use the abbreviations only when you don't have space (sms) or time (online chat).
Interested/ing: Something interests you = you are interested.
You interest someone = you are interesting.
Germany interests you, so you receive the action = "I'm interested in Germany".
"I'm interesting in Germany" means that when you leave Germany you become a boring person. ;)
Europe, particularly Germany: Germany is part of Europe, but saying "Germany and Europe" sounds like you think Germany is not part of Europe.
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