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Will Spain recover?
Another day in the Spanish critical situation crisis. More scandals over corruption in our main political parties and tax avoidance. Meanwhile the numbers of children that are not properly feed fed or and families that do not have enough money to pay their mortgage loans, rents or the energy needed to keep their houses adequately warm, are on a the rise. Spaniards' Spain's recovery is yet still far off, especially taking into account "no- help" the lack of help from the European institutions. I'm afraid the recovery will arrive too late for many families and their children.
Hello Fer. How are you?
Let's make a few changes, although it is already a fine essay, some things I will not change, because your first sentences read like the brevity of Newspaper Copy, and that may be your intended effect:
Will Spain recover?
Another day in the Spanish critical situation. More scandals over corruption in our main political parties and tax avoidance. Meanwhile the number of children that are not properly feed or families that do not have enough money to pay their mortgage loans, rents or the energy needed to keep their houses adequately warm [is] on [the] rise. Spaniards' recovery is yet far [away], especially taking into account "no- help" from the European institutions. I'm afraid the recovery will arrive too late for many families and their children.
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It is a fine essay. You can be assured that self-confidence is justified.---Warm Regards, Bruce
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