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Which way should I choose I've quit my job as being a accountant. Now, I'm stay at home, thingking what I should do in after the vocation. My family menbers are very worride about my job and my marriage.Maybe I should make an explanation here. I haven't been married, what my families worride about is that whether I could find a boy friend who can be my future husband as quickly as they expect. In china parents are always focus too much attetion to their children.They concerned about their carrer, marriage,and other important things in their children's life. Now I can not figure out what kind of carrer I want to begin in the nearly future.I was an accountant before,but I don't think it can be a carrer, because I'm not so interested in this area. But what is my carreer?I don't know .I'm a partime English teacher of two lovely young boys.I like this job. I like to communicate with people. Um maybe I can make a stop here. I'm very confused now. Can you give me some advices as well as corrections?

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Hello Larita: I think you are very brave to make a firm decision this way. Also, I do not doubt that you would make an excellent English teacher. Is your English strong? I would be very happy to learn more about you, as you appear to be a very interesting person.---Warm Regards, Bruce
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Which Way Should I Choose

I've quit my job as  an accountant. Now, I stay at home, thingking what I should do in after  vacation.
My family members are very worried about my job and my marriage.Maybe I should make an explanation here. I haven't been married, what my family worried about is t whether I could find a boy friend who can be a protential husband of mine as quickly as they could expect. In china parents are always focus too much attetion on their children.They concerned about their carrer, marriage,and other important things in their children's lives.
Now I can not figure out what kind of carrer I want to begin in the near future.I was an accountant before,but I don't think it could be a carrer, because I'm not so interested in this area.
But what is my carreer?I don't know .I'm a part-ime English teacher of two lovely young boys.I like this job. I like to communicate with people.

Maybe I can make a stop here.
I'm very confused now.
Can you give me some advices as well as corrections?

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It takes a lot of courage to quit a job you don't like. But it's the right thing to do! Follow your dreams!
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Which Way Should I Choose

I've quit my job as being a accountant. Now, I'm staying at home, thinking about what I should do in after the vacation. (Vocation means profession.)
My family members are very worried about my job and my marriage. Maybe I should make an explanation here. I haven't been married, what my family worries about is that whether I could find a boy friend who can be my future husband as quickly as they expect. In China, parents are always focus too much attention on their children. They are concerned about their careers, marriageand other important things in their children's lives.
Now I can not figure out what kind of career I want to begin in the near future. I was an accountant before, but I don't think it can be a careerbecause I'm not so interested in this area.
But what is my career?I don't know. I'm a part-time English teacher of two lovely young boys. I like this job. I like to communicate with people.
Um Maybe I can make a stop here.
I'm very confused now.
Can you give me some advice as well as corrections?

 

I corrected a few punctuation spacing, spelling, capitalization and missing/improper tense parts of speech, but this is well written. Your heart will tell you what you desire to spend your life doing. If you do what you love, you will never have to work a day in your life!

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Let me know where you are trying to go with this article and I would be happy to help you better!

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