First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because one day I'd like to go to the States and to England and I think that English is very important to travel in every part of world too. I would like to know and talk with a lot of people from other countries! :)
My native language is Italian and I grew up in the north of Italy, near the wonderful city of Venice.
I enjoy to traveling, reading fantasy books, listening to rock music, going out with my friends, taking photos and drawing :)

Very good!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because one day, I'd like to go to the States and to England. and I think that English is very important to travel with in every part of world too. I would like to know and talk with a lot of people from other countries! :)
My native language is Italian. and I grew up in the north of Italy, near the wonderful city of Venice.
I enjoy to traveling, read fantasy books, listen to rock music, go out with my friends, take photos, and draw :)

Nice job by the way! If you want to practice speaking English using Skype, I would be happy to help!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because one day I'd like to go to the States and to England and I think that English is very important to travel in every part of world too. I would like to know and talk with a lot of people from other countries! :)
My native language is Italian and I grew up in the north of Italy, near the wonderful city of Venice.
I enjoy to travel, read fantasy books, listen rock music, go out with my friends, take photos and draw :)

Bravissima!  Well done!

I want to talk about the final sentence: the list of activities you enjoy.  Sentences like this often work best if activities are described in the same format. ie. I enjoy travelling, reading, listening... or... I like to travel, read, listen... It can get tricky when the list is as varied as yours.  You did a very good job.  After "I enjoy" we don't use "to" as we would with "I like".  I'll try writing this sentence in my own words:

I enjoy travelling, reading fantasy novels, listening to rock music, going out with friends, taking photos and drawing.

To be more concise, I'll try the list formatted more like a list of nouns that describe the actions:

I enjoy travel, fantasy novels, rock music, outings with friends, photography and drawing.

It seems messy that the activity of travel, and the activity of drawing have different endings, that's English!  Most native English speakers would say/write travelling instead of travel, which would be fine.  FYI (For Your Information) In British English I believe travelling has two 'l's and in the USA one 'l'.  In Canada either spelling is acceptable.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because one day I'd like to go to the States and to England and I think that English is very important to travel in every part of world too. I would like to know and talk with a lot of people from other countries! :)
My native language is Italian and I grew up in the north of Italy, near the wonderful city of Venice.
I enjoy to traveling, reading fantasy books, listening to rock music, going out with my friends and taking photos and drawing :)

[Very good.  "I like to travel", "I enjoy traveling" ]

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because one day I'd like to go to the States and to England and I think that English is very important to FOR travel in every part of world too. I would like to know MEET and talk with a lot of people from other countries! :)
My native language is Italian and I grew up in the north of Italy, near the wonderful city of Venice.
I enjoy to travel(ING), readING fantasy books, listenING TO rock music, goING out with my friends, takING photos and drawING :)