Movie again.

Today, I and my friend watched movies in hongdae very early this morning.

-> My friend and I watched movies in Hongdae very early this morning. ('This morning' is already used so you don't have to put 'today')

We made a plan to watch two movies one after another because we preferred to watch two different movies. xD

-> We decided to watch one movie after another because we wanted to watch two different movies. xD

So I got up really early, went hongdae, watched 7번방의 선물&몬스터호텔
(present of room.7&Hotel Transylvania)

-> So I got up really early, went to Hongdae and watched 7번방의 선물&몬스터호텔.

The 1st one, 7번방의 선물 was really funny but so sad. We both cried. ㅠ_ㅠ Because of this we had really heavy and sleepy eyes all day.

-> The first one,7번방의 선물 was really funny, but there were sad scenes that made us both cry. ㅠ_ㅠ Because of this we had really heavy and sleepy eyes all day.

After watching moviews we had TACO at lunch in TACOBELL, and went to cafe to talk, then came home.

-> After watching movies we had tacos for lunch at Tacobell, then we went to a cafe to talk. Then, we went home.

Thanks in advance! I've just started to write diary in english on my note book(not italki note i mean) so I think I'll write many note from now on so thanks you guys in advance for correcting me.

->Thanks in advance! I've just started to write a diary in English on my notebook (not italki note) so I think I'll write manys notes from now on. Thank you guys in advance for correcting me.

~Hello Danbi! You had a great time with your friend. You must feel really happy. :)

My friend and I watched movies in Hongdae very early this morning. 

(It is more natural and polite to say "my friend and I" instead of "I and my friend").

We made a plan to watch two movies, one after another, because we preferred to watch two different movies. xD

So I got up really early, went to hongdae, and watched 7번방의 선물 and 몬스터호텔.

The 1st one, 7번방의 선물, was really funny but so sad.

We both cried. ㅠ_ㅠ

Because of this we had really heavy and sleepy eyes all day.

After watching movies we had tacos for lunch at Tacobell, went to a cafe to talk, and then came home.

Thanks in advance! I've just started to write a diary in English in my notebook (not italki note I mean) so I think I'll write many notes from now on. Thanks you guys in advance for correcting me.

Movie again.

Very early this morning, my friend and I watched movies in hongdae.
We made a plans to watch two movies one after another because we preferred to watch two different movies. xD
So I got up really early, went hongdae, watched 7번방의 선물&몬스터호텔
(present of room.7&Hotel Transylvania)
The 1st one, 7번방의 선물 was really funny but so sad.
We both cried. ㅠ_ㅠ
Because of this we had really heavy and sleepy eyes all day.
After watching moviews we had TACO at lunch in TACOBELL, and went to cafe to talk, then came home.

Thanks in advance! I've just started to write diary in english on my note book(not italki note i mean) so I think I'll write many note from now on so thanks you guys in advance for correcting me.