Hello Amanda:   This is an excellent essay subject. I liked it. Let's dress up some spelling and then  see how it looks.  Your ideas are very sound, just as they are.

Some Feeling  (or feelings)  About Life:

  In  our daily  life,   we always [often]  meet someone [new], that you have not known before. [or you can just say that "you meet someone new."

  But it [the person]  might become [play] a very important role in your life [future]. We can not refuse it. [or you can say,  "We should not refuse the experience."

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  Today  I met a strange people.  [a strange person, because he is only one]

He has many advantages.   He told me many things.

We only met one time.   I think this is    [a] good idea.   [or a good thing, or a good experience,  or an experience that can be of great benefit to me.] Thank you.

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   Amanda!  What an interesting essay you wrote. I found it to be very original in its conception,   and so spontaneous as to capture all of my attention.

   I also think, that this man might have found you attractive, because he took the time to talk to you quite a bit.   Aren't you the lucky girl though?

     What a wonderful   piece of writing!  There is a great charm in this.

Either you have a powerful intuition,  or there is something of a philosopher about you.    ---Warm regards,  Bruce