shirley's notebook entry: Oct 03, 2010 family

First, I’ll point out a few minor errors. 

.At noon,I cooked the lunch with my mom.

Then, mom, my sister and me I had a chat with each other.

We get had many delicious foods for dinner.

… maybe this kind of life is what i have always been looking for.

That makes the passage more or less grammatically correct.  It is “correct but not common,” that is, the grammar is correct but it’s not the way we commonly speak.  Here is how I would write it, in colloquial language.

Today’s a nice day.  I felt fine in the morning because I had a good night’s sleep (or: I slept well),

At noon I cooked lunch with my mom.  Then my mom, my sister and I talked for a while.

In the afternoon I went shopping with my friends.

In the evening Dad was home.

We had a lot of good food for dinner.  We drank, talked and laughed.

At that moment I realized that maybe that was the kind of life I’ve always been looking for.

BTW.  A little bit of American culture.  Most Americans eat breakfast, lunch and dinner.  In south Louisiana where I live, we eat breakfast, dinner and supper.  That is, we have traditionally eaten dinner, our big meal,  at midday.