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Today:31/01/2013 today is end of January. I bought pink knitting. I want spring has come early. it'll be warm,I wanna go strawberry farms :)

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Today:31/01/2013

Today is the last day of January.

I bought a pink knitted ???.
I want the spring has to come early.

it'll It will be warm in Spring and I wanna want to go to the strawberry farms :)

(It'll) is not a good grammatical choice in this context. ( wanna ) is slang and not correct English, it is best not to use these short cuts when learning and actually even in general speech in many circles you would raise the eyebrows of your listeners if you said "it'll be warm and I wanna go". This is extremely casual and if your listener did not know you, might question your education.

It is a great effort regardless and withour mistakes we do not learn. I would like Spring to hurry up also so I can be on holiday in Japan!! :-) 

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Today:31/01/2013

Today is the end of January.

I bought a pink knitted garment.
I want the spring to come early.

It'll be warm. I wanna go to the strawberry farms :) Regards! :D

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Terima kashi :) spring,spring :)!!
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so cute! ^_^ i want to go to strawberry farms too!

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