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My family I am an Ukrainian girl from town located on Azov sea. Since I was a little girl I was dreaming to grow up, have my own family and kids. I was sure I will live somewhere abroad and my husband won't be from Ukraine. My close friends knew that and made fun of me :) They repeatedly said that it shoudn't be so! That there are so many "normal" guys in Mariupol... But... As it turn out I was right ! I left parents' house in 2007. I went to Cyprus to study in the College of tourism. I also worked in the Hilton Cyprus hotel. And I have met there my husband!! He is not Ukrainian:) He is from Georgia. Well, we got married in March 2011, I gave birth to our son in September 2012! We are small, but indescribably happy family!

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My family

I am an a Ukrainian girl from town located on the Azov sea. Ever since I was a little girl, I was dreaming to dreamed about growing up and having my own family and kids. I was sure I would live somewhere abroad and my husband wouldn't be from Ukraine. My close friends knew that and made fun of me :) They repeatedly said that it shouldn't be so! There are so many "normal" guys in Mariupol... But... As it turns out, I was right ! I left my parents' house in 2007. I went to Cyprus to study in the College of tourism. I also worked in the Hilton Cyprus hotel. And I have met there my husband there!! He is not Ukrainian:) He is from Georgia. Well, we got married in March 2011 and I gave birth to our son in September 2012! We are a small, but indescribably incredibly happy family!

 

Very good! Just a few notes:

"An" is usually correct before a vowel, but "Ukranian" starts with a hard vowel and so it can take "a." There are some grammar texts that say otherwise, but I definitely see it more commonly like this.

Your original "since" sounds more causal than having to do with time. "Ever since" places you in the past a bit better.

The verb agreement stuff for the next few sentences gets complicated and I could explain it if you're more interested in those kinds of details...

"Indescribably" is grammatically correct, but "incredibly" sounds more appropriate.

Cheers!

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Well done babe :)

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