Sad...

Hello everybody,

Today to Brazil is sad, sad because many people person had killed in a fire yesterday. 231 lifes, 231 dreams, 231 families ... It is sad, but the life carry on. I wish peace for departed sole and their families. Have a nice week life everyone have .

Sad...

Hello everybody,

Today to Brazil is sad, sad because many people killed in a fire yesterday. 231 lifes, 231 dreams, 231 families ... It is sad, but the life carry on. I wish peace for families. Have a nice week everyone.

Today is a sad day in Brazil.  Sad because many people were killed in a fire yesterday.
231 lives, 231 dreams, 231 families... It is sad but life carries on.
I wish peace to the families (who lost their loved ones).

Have a good week everyone.

() So uma sugestão para tornar o texto mais fluido.
Esta fazendo muito bom! Keep it up ;)

Sad...

Hello everybody. 

Today to Brazil is sad. Sad because many people were killed in a fire yesterday. 231 lives, 231 dreams, 231 families... It is sad, but the life carries on. I wish peace for the families peace. Have a nice week everyone.

Sad...

Hello everybody,

Today it is a sad day for Brazil, sad, because many people died  in a fire yesterday. 231 lifes, 231 dreams, 231 families ... It is sad, but life goes on... I wish peace for these families. Have a nice week everyone.

Oi! Mi idioma nativo esel español.Estuve al tanto de la trista noticia enseguida,porque veo la television brasilera para practicar portugues.Es una situaciòn muy triste.Nada mas que decir,como tu,paz para esas familis.Abraço.