First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello,my name is Pure.I am learening Chinese,because i am study Computer science and technology in china,i want to make friends from English country,i love learn english,my native language is chinese,i like playing basketball,i love Kobe and James.Let us become friends~
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, my name is Pure. I am learning English Chinese, because I am studying computer science and technology in china, and I want to make friends from English-speaking countries. I love learning English. My native language is Chinese, and I like playing basketball; I love Kobe and James. Let us become friends~ ("I hope we can become friends." is better)
No comma (,) in sentence with "because". "I like driving because it is fun."
Put space after each punctuation mark.
Capitalize the letter "I".
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
... science and technology in China
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