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First notebook entry: Introducing myself l want freedom life.l can traviling or do l liking. ameraic is my favorit country like her. l think l will go to ameraic one day. come on! l will success

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

l want freedom in life. l can traviling or do l liking. I like to travel. ameraic America is my favorite country like her. l think l will go to ameraic America one day. come on! I can do this! l will success succeed!

 

Always capitalize countries.  

 

The phrase "come on" can be used as encouragement, but a natural speaker would not place it after the sentence "I think I will go to America one day." because it does not fit.

"I can do this!" (also "I can do it!") is a vague term by itself, but I used that phrase because I figured you were trying to say something more along the lines of 加油!


success = noun; succeed = verb

 

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