hi I'm learning english cause I want to make friends and improve my skills

i welcome with everybody want to be my friend and want to speak English.

Corrections:

Hi,

I'm learning English because I want to make friends and improve my skills.

I welcome anybody who wants to be my friend and wants to speak English.

Hello, Hamza!

Just a few corrections for your entry today.

-I capitalized "hi" and added a comma afterward. I did this because "hi" is the start of a sentence and as a salutation is followed by a comma.

-I changed "cause" to "because". "Cause" is a noun whereas "because" is a conjunction showing causation between two parts of a sentence. Using just "cause" is slang and incorrect.

-"I" was capitalized both because it is the beginning of a sentence and because as a rule the personal pronoun "I" is always capitalized.

-"with everybody" was changed to "anybody" for correct and natural sound to the sentence

I hope these corrections help you. Best of luck with your studies!

-Charlie

hi I'm learning english cause I want to make friends and improve my skills

i welcome with everybody want to be my friend and want to speak English.

Only Suggesting:

Hi I'm learning English 'cuz I want to make friends and improve my skills.

i welcome everyone who wants to be my friend and who wants to speak English.

Hi, I'm learning english cause I want to make friends and improve my skills.

I welcome with anybody who wants to be my friend and wants to speak English.