Please check my essay,"The role of cell phones in today's society"
Cell phones are now beyond the phones. They have a precious value as a communication tool. They are inevitable for everyone, but need some rules to make a good use of them.
Firstly, they have their own etiquette. We cannot rely on its convenience.When we send mails through cell phones, we should take care of using picutres or special abbreviations.Sometimes it seems too frank to use them. But with good manners, their quickness and usefulness are helpful.
Secondly, as they are ubiquitous, we tend to addict to them. Some young people can't live without cellphones. And if they aren't cautious enough to settle reasonble price contracts, the costs will be too expensive while you don't notice.
Thirdly, they have given changes in communication styles. As in Japan, universty students need to apply for the job openings by cell phones. They are really convenient, but on the other hand,communicating only by cell phones causes the lack of face-to-face communication.
In conclusion, cell phones have two faces--good or bad. We have to understand this polarlization and use them cleverly.
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jhonatadetsu, Thank you very much.I'll keep writing!
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I have something your english is really good...have you been here in england isn't?The only problem I just have seen is about that You wrote L like R in your other posts..but that's really good
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