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In the past, I finish my first lesson via skype. We discuss the materiel about internet dating. Actually, I met my girl friend in internet. We live in the close area, so I think the internet is a convenience way to find new friend.
It was sad because we can't finish my lesson with bad internal quality.
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My english lesson
In the past, I finished my first lesson via skype. We discussed the materiel about internet dating. Actually, I met my girl friend girlfriend in on the internet. We live in the close same area, so I think the internet is a convenience convenient way to find new friends.
It was sad because that we can't could not finish my lesson with because of the bad internal quality.
I'm not the best person to be correcting this, but i hope this helps. good luck!
also, Instead of saying In the past. I would Probably say something like
yesterday, I finished my first lesson via skype.
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My english lesson
In the past, I finished my first lesson via skype. We discussed the materiel about internet dating. Actually, I met my girl friend in internet. We live in the close area, so I think the internet is a convenience way to find new friend.
It was sad because we can't finish my lesson with bad internal quality.
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^^ Thank you.
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also to the word discuss. put "ed".:)
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you said in the past, so maybe you should put "ed" at the word finish. because it is already done.. hehehehe just correcting you with what I've known.
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