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Hellooooooo everybody ¡¡¡¡ !!! (In English we do not use upside down exclamation marks) I (always begin a sentence with a capital letter) am ready to begin this support wonderful way to learn a new language.for us , Aren´t you?
I am learning English (always use a capital letter for the names of languages, people and place names) and i am study in and am taking an online course from byui Brigham Young University in the USA. as you know, i wish I would like to find a meet new people with from differents cultures and places and have a great time meantime we sharing our skills, capacities, and experiences. If you are in have the same desire, then get in and contact me and let's begin our contact m ready ?? journey together. (I have reworded this last part to reflect more clearly what I believe you wished to say)
.......... I have bussiness administration degree and i like the enjoy a healthy and spiritual life. I love sports, good food, I work for goverment institution and i have a great wonderful son (I have eliminated the multiple "I's" as it is already implied when you began the sentence with "I")........... WELLCOME TO MY LIFE ¡¡¡¡ !!! If someone anyone would like to interchange share languages, I could would be happy to teach you Spanish in exchange for being able to practice my English. and i need english practice only
Well done Ruben! Although there were a number of grammatical and spelling errors, your message came through quite clearly. The changes I have made reflect how a native English speaker would have written this post.
Your English will gradually improve with continued practise. Please pay attention to my comments throughout your post as they emphasize the most important points I wanted to impress upon you.
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