sad weather brings along sad feelings..
... although it's almost the last ''official'' spring day, it's rather cold outside.. there isn't any sign of the sun in the sky and strong wind is blowing.. i wish it were warm and shiny day, without any single cloud in the sky.. cuz such sad weather always makes me feel sad, empty and hollow.. the saddest memories and feelings began overwhelming me and filling me up... hope i'm not gonna be seized with depression or climb the walls ... =)
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sad weather brings along sad feelings..
... although it's almost the last ''official'' spring day, it's rather cold outside.. there isn't any sign of the sun in the sky and strong wind is blowing..I wish it WAS A warm and BRIGHT/SUNNY day, without any single cloud in the sky.. cuz such sad weather always makes me feel sad, empty and hollow.. the saddest memories and feelings began overwhelming me and filling me up... hope i'm not gonna be seized with depression or climb the walls ... =)-"cuz" is a very informal way of saying "because" and "gonna " is informal "going to" ; on the other hand, saying I wish it were sounds very formal, so there is a certain clash of styles here.
-how about "I'm not gonna fall into depression"
-empty and hollow are basically synonymous, so there is an element of repetition-is it necessary?
Hope I helped,
Best wishes,Ewa
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