travel in west USA !!
Hello ! Soon i go in west USA !! i traveled with 2 friends. i arrived to Los Angeles and i stay there 2 days. Sorry my english language is not good. a good opportunity to learn. After, i go in Las vegas to celebrate the birthday of my friend and go to San francisco. what are the places to see absolutely?? thank !
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i learn so it's normal, i make mistakes...we should not allow anyone to register on italki, it will avoid the stupid comments.
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Your meant to bloody correct her mistakes not flirt.
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travel in west USA !!
Hello, Soon I go will be travelling to west USA, I traveled will be travelling with 2 friends. I will arrived to at Los Angeles and i stay there for 2 days. Sorry my english language is not good. This is a good opportunity for me to learn English. After I will be going to Las vegas to celebrate the birthday of my friend and then go to San francisco. What are other the places is there to see visit? absolutely??
Thank You!
Every time you write in first person you always use a capital "I", and also to use capital letter after "fullstop".
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i go to USA in 2 weeks. I tried to explain my Itinerary. thanks
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You will go to trip in USA, right? The tense of your sentence are mixed, so it's hard to understand.
Are you in USA now?
Anyway I hope you have a great trip in USA. One more thing, you're very pretty. Have a happy day.
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