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journey of winter
My firend and I are want to going to Val Thore in the Europe. Peoples say it is a very beautiful place. ("People" not plural here. Peoples = two or more groups of different people, of the world for example) We wonder of ("about" rather than "of" is more normal) Val Thore. We were working very hard through this year and we all saved money for this journey but only except for one friend who did not ("could not" - maybe) save any / enough money. We were Together we made a schedule and we collected money from each other for him (our friend). He become very happy. We are preparing for winter holiday now. I need a lot, of a lot of things so I was went to a winter shop but everything was expensive in there. (I think you should say "was" rather than "is" so as to stay in the same tense) I thought to buy secondhand so I searched on the Internet and I was found something useful thing. I am was lucky for to find to this things.We went to France by airplane. This stiuation was a terriable experience for my friend's Ahmet because he is get it was his first time getting on airplane first time. Ours plane landed in France that on time Ahmet said "fortunately we was landed safely". After we was went to the / our hotel by bus.. The hotel was founded above the mountain. İt is fascinating bulding. The hotel worker gave us a double room ...Will continue to
My correction is not perfect since I don't have much time but I hope it helps anyway.
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