my self

I have 16 years old and i have 7sisters and any brother,i'm the eldest in familly.

I practise since 2002

I'm studing in the first year in high school 

I like smart technologie and bussness
i want to be pilot or doctor. 
i love learning languages because i feel confotable and i can make acquaintance.
I like traveling,reading the stories,preparing my food alone and sleeping.

my self

I am 16 years old and i live(living??) in small familly which contain any brothers and 7sisters.I'm sporty - 8 years of sport-(doing sports for 8 years) 
I'm studing in the high school -1st year-
I like the technologie -smart technologie- and bussness
i want to be pilot or doctor which depend studing by hard
i love learning languages because i feel confotable and i can make (making)acquaintance.
I like traveling,reading the stories,preparing my food alone  (by myself)and sleeping.

I am 16 years old and I live in a small family which includes one [?] brother and 7 [?] sisters.

I like sports. I have been playing sports for 8 years.

I'm studying in high school. I am a freshman.

I like technology--smart technology--and business.

I want to be a pilot or a doctor. These professions require a lot of studying.

I love learning languages because I feel comfortable and I can make some acquaintances.

I like traveling, reading stories, preparing my food alone, and sleeping.

In English, we don't always use the article "the." When we talk about things in general, we don't use "the." For example: "I like technology [in general]." "I like reading stories [in general, no specific stories mentioned]." If you had referred to specific stories that you like, you could say, "The book contains poems and stories. I don't like reading the poems [that were just mentioned]. I like reading the stories [that were just mentioned]."